One Fine Day

one fine day
it all came true
like a piece of cake
every i love you
every knowing nod
every gentle nudge
as you count the cost 
on every thought of love

one fine day 
all the day could do
was to make its way
through its daily loop
with one end up
and one end down
being simple enough
with love around

one fine day
out of the blue
life ran its course
on a whistles tune
on a gravel road
under a quarter moon
to the simple truth
of i love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Very sweet, Mike. A pleasure to read.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Hello Mike, on a fine day I will on that day say i love you to someone I will date on a fine day. Lovely poem. have a nice day my friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Sweetness :)))
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