One Fat Dove

one fat dove in the pouring rain... seed bowl empty

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/8/2014 8:05:00 PM

Love doves one of my favorite birds, sorry he got caught in the rain though, nice that you feed him, and our thoughts with your lovely poem. also glad you you liked your poem except for the feather part. cheri

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2014 6:37:00 PM

at least the rain won't be getting the bird seeds wet now.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2014 6:37:00 PM

hahaha, I LOVE the picture this one creates!!!!

David Pennington

Date: 4/8/2014 6:20:00 PM

That is what happens if we don't help others. Our giving bowl is empty. I love your poetry. So meaningful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2014 6:31:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by..If we give, we shall be given to many times over..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2014 4:22:00 PM

they always manage to look so fat despite their empty bowl! Lovely write. Jan x

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2014 4:54:00 PM

Yes, those Doves and other birds can fluff up those feathers and look two or three times larger..Thanks ..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2014 3:29:00 PM

Good one Sara:) maybe that seed bowl needs to be only half filled :) // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2014 4:53:00 PM

When I look out there and see that fat dove, I think she needs diet bird seed..I feel for her because I have a tendency to be plump..Thanks ....Sara

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/8/2014 1:49:00 PM

Time to feed her, Sara! Too cute :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2014 4:52:00 PM

Sure need to replenish the birds food supply for sure.. Thanks..Sara