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One Family's Zoological Biography

One Family Parents, two daughters and a son Children were young and loved learning about life. Together, they explored the world…often visiting the zoo. Lover of: the first child with her scientific mind; she loved to watch animals and hear their sounds. Lover of: the second child and her big heart; she could make life-like elephant sounds as a child. Lover of: a son with strength; he enjoyed the zoo from his stroller and listened to us make animal sounds. Who feels: happy when orangutans swing close enough to almost touch, connecting. Who feels: ecstatic when the elephant takes a peanut from little hands…imagining a safari on its back. Who feels: uncontrollable laughter when a baby chimpanzee swings and flips around in trees. Who fears: the pacing tiger’s glaring look. Who fears: the alligator’s thrashing, splashing and swimming close. Who fears: the grizzly’s growl as it echoes through the park. Who would like to see: the whole zoo while riding on elephants’ backs. Who would like to see: family parrot pictures with birds on heads and every arm. Who would like to see: the king of beasts preening a little lamb. Resident Visitors of the Jacksonville Zoological Society Zoo-Ville is the place where my family found much fun. © Dane Smith-Johnsen September 18, 2010 NOTE: I stuck to the bio poetic form format as closely as possible to the Poetry Soup definition.

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Date: 9/27/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:07:00 PM
One lovely family Dane. Many congratulations.
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:21:00 PM
ok, now yours is the only one at all that I see using this form that is described in poetry forms. Nobody else I am seeing did it this way but you. I am very confused. Anyway, a big congrats to you , Dane and for getting the rules right too!!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:51:00 PM
Such a fun story about your family's visit to the zoo, Dane Ann! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this finw win in the contest, Dane
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:34:00 PM
Great story and congrangratulations Dane Anne. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:05:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your win in the Story Time contest with this wonderful write and super win tonight ..enjoy my friend with luv...
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win in my Story Time contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:09:00 AM
nice one , good luck in the contest
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