One Excuse Leads To Another

What do you mean you see lies in my eyes?
Stop it now hon...Can't stand it when you cry
You do NOT know me! I swear I would never...
(What can I do? Can't hide this forever)

She asked me to dance, I was just being kind
Got crazy and drunk, lost track of the time
She said she would drive 'cause she didn't drink
Whose car? Don't remember; ours, I think
Kiss her? No way! (At least not on the face)
Where? Well I guess we went back to her place
I swear to god hon, I'm telling the truth!
First time!...Her name? I-uh, think it was Ruth...

Can you ever forgive me? Please have a heart
Can't forget? Okay, I guess that's a start...

(DAMN IT, you're a fool! What the HELL did you do?
Shoulda' denied the whole thing; she doesn't trust you!
What about the others? Can't get any dumber!
Gotta' THINK...Oh god; did I give her my number?)

***Loosely based on the divorce of two very good friends of mine... 
Susan's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 12, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Tim, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 10:38 PM
Oh ho, you have to have good memory to be a liar is how the saying goes. loved your poem Tim ...Seren
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 7:51 PM
The excuses don't fly but the writing does. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Eastman Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Sad but interesting write... I know this happens... and your writting seems so real.
A   Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Hi Tim, , nice to see you on Susan's winning list... hope you were forgiven... always~ PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 3:50 PM
Lotts of meat and a laugh too..glad to see you winning! Cher Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 3:28 PM
oh oh..............you are playing with dynamite here!! LOL !! This may be too close to home for some people...... but a sure fire winner in the contest!! Congratulations on your tale of woe, Tim! Proves that you should always stick close to Ruth..........(Oops...I meant stick close to the truth!!!!)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations Tim xx
Collins Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 8:07 AM
I cringe
Macfarlane Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 1:12 PM
You captured the drama exceptionally well in the unique write. Excellent write Tim! Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 4:09 PM
Got a chuckle even though it is not funny in real life..It is sad...Thanks for stopping by..We did not get a storm or snow but got some much needed rain..Sara
Wesley Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 6:14 AM
You had me scared Tim, I wondered what you were up to and was relieved at the last lines. It's an old story but the hurt is always new. Great reading these insightful lines! Love, Elizabeth
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