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One Drop At a Time

Baby blue skies extending forever through verdant valleys and hugging mountainsides Eagles glide gracefully on a butterscotch breeze captivating lost feelings in me Oh to soar so solitarily away from pain strapping me in to a dreamless scene where windows are tinted and freedom's only hinted A glazed gaze away from the day into a peaceful sun the futures begun On top the evergreen it twirls swaying in the silence one drop at a time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, in chat I will tell you how I related this to me, hint "one drop at a time"
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:49:00 AM
Can I hang glide there.. I think I can, I see the landscape unfold.
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Date: 11/10/2016 5:01:00 PM
I love your butterscotch breeze...and to soar solitary in silence far from those drops falling one at a time..is an amazing solution to.cure.our heart...and wash awag our worries...Am touched..A fave.
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Date: 11/10/2016 4:25:00 PM
This picture you paint in your poem sounds like a good way to escape one's worries. To just kick back and enjoy mother nature.
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Date: 11/10/2016 11:11:00 AM
One step at a time Tim.
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Date: 11/10/2016 10:53:00 AM
Tim , This one is so nice! I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 11/10/2016 10:44:00 AM
This was beautiful Tim and uplifting. I love the feeling in this and "butterscotch breeze", I wish I had thought of that.
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