One Day Left

“If you want to see her, Auntie,
You must come soon as you can”.
That I should live beyond my niece,
Hadn’t been part of my plan.

I arrived soon after the others
Had all gone home, to let her rest.
It was after hours, her nice nurse
Let me in without protest.  

Her eyes were closed, she opened them
To greet me with weary smile.
She looked so tired; I knew that I
Must stay only a short while.

I leaned closer to hear her voice,
“It’s been such a happy day.
Everyone has come to see me”, 
The last words she’d ever say.

Her head fell as she closed her eyes,
“I’ll come again tomorrow”.
She did not respond next morning.
That day was filled with sorrow.

   **********************

When I have one day left to live,
The last words I hope to say,
“With my loved ones here around me,
This is such a happy day”.


Won a 4th place in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/25/2011 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:23:00 PM
Great descriptiveness and rhyming are contained in this fine presentation. Congratulations on winning in Walayee's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:09:00 AM
Awesome job Joyce, good to see your most worthy poem at the top. Congratulations on your poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/19/2011 2:15:00 PM
So true so very true. Congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:05:00 AM
Joyce congratulations on a well deserved win in Lay's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:25:00 AM
Great work,Joyce.Cogratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:10:00 PM
Many congratulations for this victory
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in Lay's contest with this touching write my friend.. enjoy...
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful and so touching! I love this, You have a most sincere heart As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:51:00 PM
Such beautiful last words Joyce. it is sad thing your grandniece died so young.i certainly would wish for such beautiful last words too.
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:09:00 PM
So sad the grandniece had to die young, Joyce. But those last words -- I hope we can all say that our final day was happy because we were surrounded by loved ones. Very touching. Dying people are often filled with peaceful resignation. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:54:00 PM
Ah, very beautiful- that would be a wonderful way to go- with family near and filled with love. Lovely :) hugs, Kris
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:29:00 PM
Heart warming....sad, but yet not sad! What beautiful words to be said at the end. ~
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