One Day In Our Life

a cross weighing more than the bridge supporting it somehow gets across

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 4:55:00 AM

Our crosses would probably be doubted by many, and yet, here they are, "getting across the bridge of life". Deep!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 4:07:00 PM

Crosses are very real Caren and hard to bear, but many carry too much baggage, and think it’s a cross now that I can not bear, cheers

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/18/2021 1:54:00 PM

Heavily is the cross That somehow how got accros So much for burnt bridge's

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/18/2021 2:13:00 PM

I was alluding to the everyday struggles in our lives Christopher, some insurmountable but we as you rightly put it, somehow get across even when the load is too much to bear, cheers David