One Dark and Misty Night

There is a place inside the woods where I wound up one night
Way up in the mountains where I went to get a bite
Circumstances led me there the day my car broke down
I thought I’d get a meal as I was stranded near the town

It was a lovely autumn day, the trees were crimson red
it was their last hurrah before the leaves were dried and shed
But halfway through my journey my engine seized and died
My cell phone had no signal, nowhere was there a ride

Then I saw the smoke emerging from a chimney top
Way up in the mountain where I thought there’d be a shop
And so I started climbing as the day had turned to dusk
Even now, I still can smell the pine trees and the musk

Echoes in the misty night surrounded me with fear
Something was behind me I could feel that it was near
I started walking faster as my heart began to race
The eerie sounds of creatures filled the earth and every space

That’s when I heard the howling of the wolves into the night
And when I felt the burning of the teeth sink in and bite
I screamed in pain and horror as I fell onto the ground
I started crawling to a house, the closest in the town

But just before I reached the door, I felt a bite again
I know that I was saved but don’t remember, how or when
The people in the cabin took me in and made me well
A few days later I was healed, the bites no longer swelled

But now each time the moon is full I roam the woods til light
All because my car broke down one dark and misty night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Stranded/Ghosts" contest Samia. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Thank you very much Carol! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 12:46 PM
A cut and paste apology for a cogratulations message but congrats. Am on holiday with limited access xx
Salama  Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so much Mandy! I appreciate it!
Horsman Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:51 PM
This wonderful winner could be a movie script, it is written so well, and werewolves are all the rage at the moment. congrats to you Samia. harry
Salama  Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Hi Harry, I'm so glad you liked it! And from your lips to a movie producer's ears! LOL Really, thank you very much.
May Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:46 PM
how you told this story in rhyme is a thing of beauty...congrats on your win Samia
Salama  Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Thank you very much Joseph! That is very kind of you! :)
Guzzi Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Ut OH werewolf??Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Salama  Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:10 PM
Hey Debbie, Yes, werewolf! LOL, Thank you so much Debbie! :)
Mohammed Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Flowing and well written (smile)..I liked it!. Thanks for sharing Samia..-Diana
Salama  Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Hi Diana, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you very much. :)
O'Leary Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Nice twist!
Salama  Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Thank you very much Terry!
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