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One Cricket

One cricket rubs legs Singing his jimminey song Crows are silent now No vultures fly high circling A quiet autumn twilight

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Susan Burd

Date: 10/17/2012 7:35:00 AM

I take in a breath of fresh air when I read your beautiful poem. thank you.

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/10/2012 9:28:00 PM

Great tanka, what ever it is. I'm very busy again. Can hardly find the time to get around. But yes I miss you too. And our time. But glad to be at work. Continue to pray for my success. Love john.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2012 2:59:00 PM

A SENSATIONAL VIEW OF NATURE ENHANCING SIGHTS AND SOUNDS SARA .. WINNING WISHES LUV.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/10/2012 9:52:00 AM

Sara; Very beautiful and well written. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2012 9:30:00 AM

another beauty herre, Sara - we don't have vultures or crickets here

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/10/2012 12:27:00 AM

I am always surprised and speechless when I read your writes. Your poems are great!

Don Johnson

Date: 10/9/2012 6:39:00 PM

beware the jaws of cricket here, if they do nibble on yer ear, they want their meat tonight:)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/9/2012 6:30:00 PM

Oh mercy me Sara!...Looks like you have mastered Tankas too!...If this is for the contest I think we have a winner here...

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/9/2012 5:52:00 PM

very very nice! i like!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2012 5:13:00 PM

I just love those peaceful Autumn nights, they bring a lot of pleasure to my evenings! This poem brought those memories to life my friend! I really enjoyed this wonderful piece, Great Work!!