Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

One Couple Of Days - OBD

One Couple Of Days ago last week,
the two dead men found out they were really meek.
The blind woman has learned how to knit,
she loves to knit shoes for her bunny outfit.
The deaf policeman is now off the force,
he loves being a twenty-six hour DJ in the mall concourse.
The two dead boys love to play lively pranks,
like driving down main street in their big red tanks.

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William Kelii Kekaula October 17, 2025 at 7:40 AM I like this fun write of contrary lines, nice one, my friend, Aloha. Paula Goldsmith October 17, 2025 at 10:51 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Glad you found this to be a, nice one. It was a ton of fun to bring to life as my imagination was working overtime. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Karen Jones October 16, 2025 at 3:34 PM A fun read! Enjoyed! We both did this one! Good luck in the contest Paula! Paula Goldsmith October 17, 2025 at 10:50 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading this one. This was so much fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world.............

Emilia James October 16, 2025 at 10:38 AM Enjoyed your joyful and fun poem Paula. I shall be keeping out of the way of those big red tanks. All the best in the contest. Emilia : ) Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2025 at 11:43 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, All the best in the contest. Glad you enjoyed this fun/crazy write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life as my imagination was working overtime. Oh Yes, keep out of the way of those big red tanks. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Zyrool Gifford October 15, 2025 at 1:05 AM Hello Paula, beautifully creative and funny write. Good luck with the contest, my poet friend. Have a great day. Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2025 at 11:40 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, Good luck with the contest. Glad you found this to be a, beautifully creative and funny write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life as my imagination was working overtime. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Sam Kauffman October 14, 2025 at 1:53 PM Hilarious, Paula! You really got into the spirit of this contest! Best wishes for a win! Blessings. Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2025 at 11:38 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, Best wishes for a win. Glad you found this to be, Hilarious. That makes me happy. It was a ton of fun to write as my imagination was working overtime. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2025 at 1:50 AM - What an imaginative poem, Paula... so fun to read... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:46 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, best wishes in the contest. Glad you found this to be, fun to read. It was a ton of fun to write as my imagination was working overtime. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Valsa George October 13, 2025 at 8:07 PM Very imaginative and a fun read. It is a powerful entry in Charlie's contest. All the Best dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:43 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found this to be, a powerful entry in Charlie's contest. It was a ton of fun to write as my imagination was working overtime. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

sara Etgen-Baker October 13, 2025 at 5:50 PM outstanding contest entry,Paula...best wishes with this contest entry Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:40 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Also Thanks for your, best wishes with this contest entry.  Glad you found this to be an, outstanding contest entry.  It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

John Loving Iii October 13, 2025 at 5:13 PM The OBD confused me. But I think it has something to do with the after life. Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:37 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. This is for a contest. They wanted OBD after the title. Has nothing to do with the after life. This was so much fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2025 at 3:59 PM You did well with this one, Paula. It's sure a fun challenge Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:28 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. It sure was a fun challenge. Made me think outside the box. Hahaha!!! This was so much fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Kim Rodrigues October 13, 2025 at 2:01 PM Well done! Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:24 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Glad you found this to be, Well done. It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world............

Jay Narain October 13, 2025 at 11:11 AM nice rhyming stories. Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:23 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Glad you found this to be, nice rhyming stories. It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world...........

Kevin Leake October 13, 2025 at 10:52 AM Enjoyed the Rhyme Paula Nicely done Best wishes Kevin Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 9:19 AM Thank You for stopping to read my fun and crazy "One Couple Of Days" write. Glad you enjoyed this and found this to be, Nicely done. This was so much fun to write. Have a fun day writing away in this crazy world.............

Paula Goldsmith October 13, 2025 at 8:56 AM "One Couple Of Days" - OBD ~ Date Written:10/13/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet....