One Couple Of Days

One snowy couple of days, one hundred ten degrees 
No wind at all, just a calm cool breeze  
Sweat dripped down, from above my head 
I hadn't spoken a word... but this is what I said 
I said it was hot, on this chilly day 
So, I went to work, and begun to play
When the snow had melted, I made a snowball  
Then, I forgot what happened, if I do recall
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Dutta Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Got It and Enjoyed. Trying your contest in my style. Have Good Days
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 3:06 PM
I need to ask you a question about your contest. At soupmail
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:22 AM
I replied.
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 11:42 AM
I love this and the contest idea! I don’t think I’m able to meet the challenge though! lol I will try.
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:22 AM
You got this! Thanks, Karen.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:59 AM
I often feel hot on a chili day!
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:23 AM
LOL- me too!
Daniel Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:11 AM
Excellent work, Charlie and great idea for the contest:)
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 9:30 PM
coolio...this is hard to beat,charles! :)
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:17 AM
Thanks, Nette...you got this!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 5:55 PM
thanks for the example...witty and creative!
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:18 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 4:51 PM
haha. what a cool challenge you gave us. I loved the sample poem at your contest page too!
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:18 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Hope to see what you come up with!
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