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One Candle

Her crimson heart blanches, broken, her soul aches never to numb her loss. When songbirds silently retreat to tallest treetops, shaken she lights her solitary restlessness. On the windowsill, it flickers and flirts with dusk's sifted air. Constant burning, I could never imagine this insatiable, impatient yearning - for one candle to beacon to one more chance. She falls, spills over, slumps into ebony night - she, steadfast, stifles sobs performing like in a Shakespearean play, pretending to want for rise of day. And I wonder why does her lone candle shine for him? Who deserves her heart sworn to love despite a deceptive guise - no intent to return, only rumors of his lies? And I wonder why I feel a kinship with her shadows, (not yet hopeless or ready to resign), they swing, lilting light, lifting prayers into angelic paths beyond, and I wonder. Her blanched heart, broken soul aches, and I, a passerby, wonder why I bleed her loss and still feel the warmth of her candle. written 2/15/17

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Date: 2/28/2017 10:30:00 PM
Oh!! My goodness Rhonda! This is awesome! Love it! Congratulations sweetie!:) Big Hugggs! Love deb
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Date: 2/25/2017 10:05:00 PM
Touching verse Congrats on topping the list!
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:06:00 AM
excellent free verse poem, good use of language and strong closing line - congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:40:00 AM
So sadly well done, congratulations Rhonda...
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:06:00 PM
I thanked you earlier for writing this poem I now congratulate you for winning the contest
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:25:00 AM
So sad and heartfelt,Rhonda!
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:15:00 AM
Wow, is all I can say! Congrats on a great write, and win!
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Date: 2/23/2017 7:03:00 AM
Great write and win Rhonda..Congrats
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Rhonda. Beautiful!
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Date: 2/23/2017 3:37:00 AM
Superb free verse Rhonda - I am in awe of your creativity - adding this to my faves so I can see how to write this form properly!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:48:00 PM
to see the world through a poet's eyes and hold gently in the palms the beating heart of emotion with a single candle is poetry at its best...thank you for this poem dear poet..
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:36:00 PM
Beautifully written, very passionate.
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Date: 2/15/2017 5:39:00 PM
All I can say now is I am glad you stopped by my blog or I might have not seen this fantastic poem and that would have been my loss. You are an amazing poet, your poem is beautifully crafted and the theme, though sad has a certain softness to it that makes it a pleasure to read. I really enjoyed this. I need to pop in on a few more of yours.
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Date: 2/15/2017 3:15:00 AM
- A poetic, touching and beautiful poem Rhonda - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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