One By One

they come thru
one by one
for their treatment
putting on airs
of courage and
determination

they file thru
one by one
the nurses dedicated
bringing cheer
with compassion
sensitive and caring

their smile
a burst
of fresh air



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 4, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT D sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Salehi Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest accomplishment or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around... love all nurses...
Salehi Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 5:17 PM
always...
Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 5:36 AM
So true, Pashang. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:24 PM
Very nice, caring :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Excellent! :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Three of my best friends are nurses, and they would all like this!
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Well by all means, go ahead and share. Line xx
Romios Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Good luck Line. I like this one, Panagiota xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Wow, beautifully done! Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.
Achilles Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:42 AM
a fitting tribute to nurses- well done, Julie
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:46 AM
So heartfelt, so well written
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Bauer Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 4:20 PM
you've painted this picture in a very touching way, line. i enjoyed...
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:11 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Much appreciated.
Turner Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:02 PM
My daughter is a nurse. I enjoyed the read, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Thank her for her service, Daniel. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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