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One Broken Monoku

The  riddled telephone pole,
                            an acorn storehouse

autumnbluemonoku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2014 4:41:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:58:00 AM

BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/28/2014 7:59:00 AM

Love it, well done and congratulations Barbara. All the best for 2015 xx

David Mohn

Date: 12/27/2014 11:31:00 PM

congrats Barbara...yours is wonderfully original

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:11:00 PM

that is one busy telephone pole. Love this, Barbara. Hope you had a great Xmas. BIG congrats in the contest.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:07:00 PM

Congrats on the win Barbara...huggs

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2014 7:01:00 PM

Nice Broken Monoku, Barbara! Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 6:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 5:45:00 PM

Back to say many congrats on your win Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 3:33:00 PM

congratulations on this win Barbara

Daver Austin

Date: 12/4/2014 1:44:00 PM

I love the short form. Have not tried monoku but this little gem has given me inspiration. Love, daver

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 8:32:00 AM

very clever write Barbara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 10:58:00 PM

Nice Monoku Barbara. It's amazing where all squirrels store their food.

David Meade

Date: 11/29/2014 9:32:00 PM

Wow, that is very good -- those squirrels are very industrial and creative. Love your broken monoku!!

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