One Broken Monoku

The  riddled telephone pole,
                            an acorn storehouse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:41 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:58 AM
BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Love it, well done and congratulations Barbara. All the best for 2015 xx
Mohn Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:31 PM
congrats Barbara...yours is wonderfully original
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:11 PM
that is one busy telephone pole. Love this, Barbara. Hope you had a great Xmas. BIG congrats in the contest.
Kayode Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Congrats on the win Barbara...huggs
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Nice Broken Monoku, Barbara! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Back to say many congrats on your win Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 3:33 PM
congratulations on this win Barbara
Austin Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 1:44 PM
I love the short form. Have not tried monoku but this little gem has given me inspiration. Love, daver
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 8:32 AM
very clever write Barbara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Nice Monoku Barbara. It's amazing where all squirrels store their food.
Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Wow, that is very good -- those squirrels are very industrial and creative. Love your broken monoku!!
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