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One bright star

As I walked around this rusted mobile home park on a cold December night, with unpaved roads and the usual strays nowhere in sight. I stopped to look up at the beautiful moonlight. It was a large full moon with a lonely star nearby. Seemed strange that no other stars were out in this clear night sky. That single one did however shine ever so bright.

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Date: 12/23/2024 1:04:00 AM
The beauty of the night star took you away for a time to get away from your sad surroundings to enjoy beauty. That star God put there for you to see and escape for a moment and marvel at beauty Liza...
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Date: 12/17/2024 7:15:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Liza Ortiz
Date: 12/19/2024 12:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for the welcome. God Bless you as well.

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