One Battle Lost One Battle Won

In iron shadows, cold and tight/
I sank beneath the weight of night/
A crime unclaimed, a fate unfair/
And all my prayers fell on deaf air/
For six months, my tears took flight/
Rising like embers into the night/
I called for grace, for mercy's hand/
But silence met my last demand/
Sentenced, shackled, years were spun/
A war begun, one battle won/
I looked to the sky; eyes burned in rage/
The heavens above, no hand was raised/
Faith had faltered, left me bare/
Hope had vanished, none to spare/
Through depths uncharted, I made my throne/
A kingdom forged in fire and stone/
The Qliphoth sang its wicked tune/
I took my seat beneath the moon/
What Gods had failed, now demons rise/
A shattered soul, no compromise/
Life moves on, do as you will/
The stars remain, yet burn so still/
One battle lost, one battle won/
I wear my scars; they weigh like none/
Bow not to Gods, nor fleeting fate/
But to the one who walks through hate/

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Date: 5/6/2025 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I thoroughly enjoyed enjoyed the depth of your write and the darkness. The feeling of prayers landing on deaf ears and hopelessness. The feelings of being unheard by the gods is described perfectly in your poem. Thank you for writing.
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Michael Fulkerson
Date: 5/6/2025 1:31:00 PM
It was an honor to enter your contest. Thank you so much for the privilege. The poem is a true story. In 1996, my prayers fell on deaf ears. Thank you for the opportunity with the contest. I am honored.
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