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One Autumn Night

Evenings have become colder as autumn leaves change and become bolder.
Summer songs are fainter as leaves fall and the trees are another year older.

Leaves carpet our path with hues of red and yellow as we continue our walk.
We watch each leaf fall as the trees are becoming silent, soon unable to talk.

Once majestic and proud the leaves are looking up at where they once aglow.
The sadness that life once ran through their veins, now waits for winter snow.

In remembrance of their season, we acknowledge the leaves in life had a reason.

Edward J Ebbs - 09/06/2014


Written for a Contest, One Autumn Night (in just 7 lines)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:10 AM
big congrats on your win, Ed. I like how you focused on the leaves like individual souls. Hope you had a lovely Christmas.
Ebbs Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:31 PM
Thanks Andrea :)
Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Yup i got a hidden meaning a statement on relationships, I hope I got it regardless I really liked it. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Ebbs Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Thank You Maurice :)
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Ed:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Thank You :)
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:05 AM
ED, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
Ebbs Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:04 AM
It's wonderful to hear from you; I hope your Christmas Season was one of good company, family, laughter and more. Love Ed
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Wonderful imagery - not sure if she wants 7 lines in total or if 5 will be ok - worth checking. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Ebbs Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Yikes, thank you :)
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