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One Autumn Day

As the wind ripped the leaves from the trees I thought of you As I stood there like those trees Stripped of all their glory Their only crime Giving birth to beauty I watched them fall All those brilliant leaves And knew you could never stop Poetry in motion. THIS POEM IS NOT FOR ANY CONTEST Written: September 14, 2014 Author: Elaine George

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Date: 9/25/2014 3:52:00 AM
Ahhhh, deep sigh. You are able to put into words the beauty of autumn! Brilliant! Into my fav's.
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:40:00 AM
This is beautiful, Lainie. Giving birth to beauty could ask for sacrifice of other things, but as in a cycle there also exists a rebirth to compensate....like those trees that will soon return to their former glory. Reminds me of a mother that gives birth to her child.....// paul
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Date: 9/16/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by, Paul. Much appreciated. Lainie
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Elaine George
Date: 9/15/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Paul. Lainie
Date: 9/15/2014 10:21:00 AM
Lovely expressions on autumn, Elaine
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Elaine George
Date: 9/15/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by Dr. Ram. Lainie
Date: 9/15/2014 12:50:00 AM
Elaine this is incredible. A beautiful little poem
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:35:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by and reading my poetry, Mark. It means a lot to me. Lainie

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