Pandita Sietesantos Poet Free verse

One Autumn Day

One Autumn Day

One cloudless, bright color-splashed Autumn day,   
as a sunny sky frivolously frolicked with butterflies of iridescent blue, 
and trees exploded with flaming colors of burnt orange, red, and yellow,
she rested on a soft bed of freshly-fallen leaves near a golden pond.
In her reflection, she saw the spirited girl she once was,
the brash nymph who uninhibitedly loved the sun god, amorous Helios, 
with glorious memories of one Autumn day forever engraved in her heart.


09-11-2014

Contest:      One Autumn Day (In Just 7 Lines)
Sponsor:     Poet Destroyer A
Placement:  9th

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2014 at 11:29 PM Wonderful alliteration, pandita! Some great lines in this Autumn poem. Congrats for your win. Pandita Sietesantos December 29, 2014 at 10:05 AM Thank you so very much, dear Andrea, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! I wish you a happy and fulfilling 2015! Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 6:27 PM Thanks once again for the comment on my comment...PD

Maurice Yvonne December 28, 2014 at 5:34 PM Back to congratulate you on your win, and to fav this sweet write. Pandita Sietesantos December 29, 2014 at 10:04 AM Maurice, I always appreciate your kind comments and thank you for complimenting my work by including in your faves. Best wishes for a happy New Year! Pandita.

Kayod5 Kayode December 28, 2014 at 11:41 AM I love this Pandita,congrats on the win...huggs Pandita Sietesantos December 28, 2014 at 3:59 PM My friend, I thank you for stopping by and leaving your wonderful congratulations which I appreciate! Best wishes, Pandita.

Jan Allison December 28, 2014 at 11:02 AM Dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs jan xxx Pandita Sietesantos December 28, 2014 at 3:58 PM Thank you dear Jan for your congratulations and continued support! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 10:16 AM nice win lady, thank you for the support. PD Pandita Sietesantos December 28, 2014 at 3:57 PM Hi Linda, thank you so very much for placing me in your contest! I was happy to participate and this was another fun one for me. Pandita.

John Matthews October 20, 2014 at 10:08 AM great imagery I can almost see the girl by the water Pandita Sietesantos October 20, 2014 at 12:10 PM Hi John, I am so delighted by your comment and compliments! Thank you, my friend! Pandita

Verlena S. Walker October 8, 2014 at 9:52 AM Superlatively written Pandita.... Rated 7! Verlena Pandita Sietesantos October 8, 2014 at 11:16 AM My dear Verlena, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work with such a high rating! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful day, my friend! Pandita

Pace Ink-U-Script September 29, 2014 at 9:02 AM I truly love the imagery of this piece...excellent write. Thanks for the inspiration! Pandita Sietesantos September 29, 2014 at 2:44 PM I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliments! Have a lovely week! Pandita

Maddy Sp September 24, 2014 at 6:01 AM Well written Pandita..Loved your imagination. @madhavi Pandita Sietesantos September 24, 2014 at 9:45 AM Hi Madhavi, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Enjoy your day! Pandita

Paul Callus September 14, 2014 at 5:11 AM This is a lovely write, Pandita, where mythology and imagery go hand in hand. Sweet memories like these are meant to last forever! gl in contest. // paul Pandita Sietesantos September 14, 2014 at 5:51 PM Thank you so very much, dear Paul, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful day, my friend! Pandita

Nette Onclaud September 13, 2014 at 4:07 PM vividly expressed.. you make autumn glow, pandita.. huggs Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 9:24 PM Hi Nette, I so very much appreciate your kind compliments. Many thanks to you, my friend! Pandita

Thvia Shetley September 13, 2014 at 3:11 PM Ooh, you're a story-teller. I love it! Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 9:23 PM Hi Thvia, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Robert Lindley September 13, 2014 at 12:33 PM A pleasure to read this one my friend. I love the mythology and very descriptive scene you've painted. Good luck in the contest my friend! Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 2:28 PM Thank you so very much, Robert, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Race Benoit September 13, 2014 at 8:34 AM Well done! The descriptive words and phrases are as colorful and a gorgeous autumn day. The end of your work also intrigued me, depicting an older woman reflecting. (At least that is what I took from it.) Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 2:25 PM Hi Race, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! You are also absolutely right about the ending. Have a great weekend! Pandita

Kika Ayala September 12, 2014 at 2:59 PM This is indeed an autumn beauty! Lovely write! Kika Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM Thank you so very much, Kika! Have a great day! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2014 at 11:58 AM Lovely and pleasing write on autumn, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 12:41 PM Thanks very much, Dr. Ram for your kind compliments! Pandita

Princess Xia September 12, 2014 at 10:50 AM This is really vivid, I love it! Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 11:46 AM Many thanks, Princess! I appreciate your compliments and I am happy that you loved it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Sudhir Pohankar September 12, 2014 at 10:50 AM It's lovely. The poem comes alive in the mind. Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 11:47 AM Hi Sudhir, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Maurice Yvonne September 11, 2014 at 6:50 PM great write. i hope you do well in the contest. Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 11:44 AM Thank you so very much, Maurice! Have a great day! Pandita

Jan Allison September 11, 2014 at 6:21 PM lovely imagery Panditia:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 11:43 AM Jan, I appreciate your compliments! Warmest regards! Pandita

Mark J. Halliday September 11, 2014 at 6:13 PM Nice. Liked it. Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 11:42 AM Thanks so very much, Mark! Have a nice weekend! Pandita