One Autumn Day

Walking along the lake under the trees brown Up comes the wind, the leaves tumbling down Furling and swirling as the wind comes puffing When Falling down make not the slightest sound Forming tapestry of scarlet, yellow, russet and brown I have never ever seen such beauty in any season Where the leaves look like flowers of different colors
+++ September 11, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Seventh Place Win Contest: One Autumn Day by P.D.
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A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:58 AM
Stunning and beautiful
Garg Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Enjoyed reading this beautiful winning poem, congrats Dr. Ram.
Devnath  Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Congrats on your win with placement, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Big congrats to you on this fine entry in the fall day contest, Dr. Ram.
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Exactly Dr.,congrats on the win...huggs
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xxx
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
May Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Very nice write Dr Ram...
Mohn Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Very Beautiful Dr. Ram
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Very enjoyable read Dr. Mehta
Ioane Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:53 PM
Beautiful colors,lovely feeling and a appreciative soul. Just what the doctor ordered for my dull uneventful day. Alofas, Tiaua.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 6:43 PM
truly very beautifully painted picture dear friend
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 12:54 PM
you color my day, dr. ram... just beautifully done!.. huggs
Nance Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 8:19 AM
I love this! right to my fav you have spoke to the joy of this season, beautiful! I love autumn and your poem, best of luck in the contest, its a winner to me;)
Reese Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:44 AM
This is surely autumn. To bad the poems can be only 7 lines, I was just getting started with mine.
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:06 AM
wonderful imagery Dr Mehta you have painted a beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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September 11, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Autumn is such a beauty. I enjoyed it in my childhood. But I have sad story to tell..now in a city where open sky is a luxury I do not find any smell of Autumn. So your poem evokes nostalgia. Thank you Mehtasaab. Love
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