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One and Only Crush

Do you know every night I dream of you
Visions of your lips upon mine
Have you any idea how much I think of you
So much it has become a pastime
Are you aware of how often I drown
Inside your perfect green eyes
My mind is so crowded with reflections of you
For other thoughts I have not the time
Haven't you noticed how we belong together
Just the notion is too sublime!
Endlessly I want to feel your touch
And to be always on your mind
If we were never to be together
That would be a terrible crime
Don't you know that you mean everything to me
I want to give you my heart for all time
You are the only one in this world I want
To be forever and always mine
Give me a chance at romance
And I promise you'll never ask why

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Mustapha Mohammed Date: 9/2/2013 5:27:00 AM This was well penned April. You've done a great job with this one. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/5/2013 3:58:00 PM This is love written so beautifully dear Login to Reply

Steven Mitchell Date: 7/31/2013 8:48:00 AM careful what you wish for... nicely done Login to Reply

Heather Secrest Date: 7/28/2013 4:14:00 PM I'm not normally a romance girl, but this one really spoke to me! It's heading to favorites! Amazing poem! -Heather Login to Reply

Wayland Bunch Date: 7/23/2013 6:23:00 PM Wow, I can truly feflect your last comment and say that I can relate to this poem, great work. Login to Reply

Husna Mirza Date: 7/22/2013 7:00:00 PM Words say it all! Lovely feelings described out there! Really good (= Login to Reply

Honestly J.T. Date: 7/22/2013 12:12:00 AM hmmm.... passion and wholeheartedly. These characteristics exude every line in this poem. A good poem Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 7/21/2013 9:34:00 PM This a very deeply felt this person should be lucky to have someone that feels like these lines speak for. and also thank you for your comments. cheri Login to Reply

Milton Toran Date: 7/21/2013 3:41:00 PM Truly heartfelt and emotional! Well-written! Milt Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 7/21/2013 11:13:00 AM A real crush does feel like the one and only. The reality of life can be cruel. I always say, when you have to tell someone that they are not the one, be gentle. An explanation that the "chemistry is just not right" seems to me to be the kindest way to say it. Some people can be cruel, and I hope you are not hurt if it doesn't work out. It might feel really bad (the voice of experience). Login to Reply

Perry Campanella Date: 7/21/2013 4:25:00 AM Hello! April Gabriella - Not many people know the difference between a crush Vs Lust, Till this Poem came along! Imagery is wonderful - The Green eyes will give you away and our secret is out - No only jokin' folks - splendid write here! Perry C. Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 7/20/2013 6:43:00 PM Very romantic and passionate rhyme April...Keep writing and growing as a poet...Have a wonderful and blessed evening - Tim Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 7/19/2013 3:12:00 PM "Crush", that term seemingly was becoming extinct. Yet, it seems to have been given a 2nd life. I see this term being used more & more....by grown adults, no less. Here's hoping they're listening! =) Nicely written here! Login to Reply