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Bathed in starlight
I traveled from dream to dream
Plasma sky rests

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/24/2016 5:55:00 AM
Great haiku. And congratulations on being featured
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Date: 5/14/2016 6:55:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Ljan. :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:38:00 PM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your great first Haiku, Ljan - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:34:00 AM
Ljan, that is a clever ONE, yup..., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2016 8:51:00 AM
Terrific effort.
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Date: 5/13/2016 8:16:00 AM
Ljan, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:46:00 AM
Ljan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:38:00 AM
Thanks :)