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I must lift your leg
The slightest move triggers pain
The cries,-heart-wrenching

hurtnostalgiapainsorrowspiritualhaiku

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Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 6:53:00 PM

Hi David, one more time. :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~

David Aaron
Date: 12/22/2015 12:40:00 AM

Hi Skat, Thank you so much! I appreciate your remarks, and am grateful that you stop by. Happy Holidays! David

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/12/2015 6:49:00 PM

Dear David I'm trying to get your thinking on these works you know a leg up if you get my drift, but I'm thinking there interesting but ok what else, cheri

David Aaron
Date: 12/14/2015 1:13:00 PM

Dear Cheri, Thank you so much for reading. I am getting ready to try writing new material. It has been a long time. These are old poems about and for my wife who broke or rebroke her leg years ago. We recently came across this material, and it brought back memories. I wrote at least a poem a day during several months of recovery, and we look at the time as a period of art therapy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2015 12:16:00 PM

- A good first haiku poem David, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Aaron
Date: 11/24/2015 2:37:00 AM

Thank you, and thank you for reading.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/20/2015 11:38:00 PM

Hi David, what an interesting first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

David Aaron
Date: 11/21/2015 9:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Pandita. I appreciate the welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2015 3:01:00 AM

Hi David, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

David Aaron
Date: 11/20/2015 3:28:00 AM

Hi Linda, Thank you for the warm greeting. I am looking forward to being part of this community. Again, thank you.

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 1:15:00 AM

WOW, David Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

David Aaron
Date: 11/21/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Skat.

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