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Once Upon a Valentine

i present myself to you as a gift although one to be shared you may not own me for i grow wild i am as rare as i am complex i am an enigma you pursue me with passion touching with warmth then gently lay me in an oasis wonderfully cool and fresh i flourish with your care and appear to grow toward you around you don't be frightened, i am simply dancing to your smile i fear your strength, hold me gently, yet firmly my stem is strong, flexible, allowing freestanding motion hold me close to you and breathe be mindful of the moments we share i will fill you with scents shifting daily with air and fire the consistency of your nourishment will allow me to thrive with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/10/2018 2:54:00 PM
- You are writing great, a lovely poem Paula :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Sun :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2018 1:04:00 PM
Sunshine Smile :)
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Paula Lee
Date: 6/11/2018 6:48:00 AM
thank you! tell me, what does -// sun mean, please
Date: 6/10/2018 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful write Paula,,Welcome to Poetry Soup
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Paula Lee
Date: 6/11/2018 7:02:00 AM
much appreciated. i'm curious, how did you see it in the first place? and, why did you like it? i ask, because no one has ever seen what i've written and wondered what someone might think and why. i just read your writing about ravens. i believe they are magical and represent good. according to native myth, the raven can bring good luck and if one crosses your path with food in its mouth, you have a gift headed your way.

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