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" HOPE " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of nature, body of water and sky

Once upon a time, 
Hope, a featherless bird was,
Which
For to escape from despair's land, 
Its very own wings did grow 
And  
Onto the place of dreams and 
Expectations, swiftly, flew.

Since then, 
Each time one of us feels blue,
Hope flies near him 
And on its aspiring wings of 
Optimism and cheerfulness, 
Carries him far from the gloomy
Ground!
   






© Demetrios Trifiatis
    13 December 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/13/2022 6:26:00 PM
Dear friend Demetrios, At different focuses in our lives, each of us searches for the "winged promise." Trust is the one thing that we must stand up to the allurement to give up on.
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Date: 12/14/2022 1:31:00 AM
My dearest friend, Lasaad. The title of the poem says it all! Thank you so much. Be blessed!
Date: 12/13/2022 10:18:00 AM
The one thing we should never give up on Demetrios, hope. We all look for those wings of hope in our lives sometimes. Tom
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Date: 12/13/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and commenting, dearest Tom. Be blessed.
Date: 12/13/2022 5:29:00 AM
Inspiring, uplifting poem my friend. Hope makes it possible.
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Date: 12/13/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for your precious comment, my dearest friend, Vijay. God bless you.
Date: 12/13/2022 2:12:00 AM
- In our world we need " aspiring wings of Optimism and cheerfulness" ... love it - hugs
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Date: 12/13/2022 3:51:00 AM
Indeed, we need, dearest Anne-Lise. Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Be blessed. Hugs xxx
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