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Once Upon a Time Vii

" This is Zeus*- the life-giving God- speaking 
come, come all you blind forces
come out of chaos 

Let us bring order, so out of this anarchy, a cosmos 
to be born, 
a universe, where uniformity will reign and all will obey 
my Logos 

To achieve this, though, you all have to learn how to dance,
to dance the dance of peaceful coexistence,
but first, a partner for you I shall find. 

Now all you pay attention!
Here is the list that I for you have prepared:


Accord dances with discord
unity with division
love with hate
joy with sorrow
hope with despair 
pleasure with suffering 
harmony with strife
mind with matter
hot with cold
humid with arid
hard with soft...
.............
And the temporal with the eternal... 

Be careful now
for each step you take, your partner will take one
keep in mind that you don't dance alone

Respect your dancing partner, and he will respect you,
what we try to achieve here is harmony
only then this wondrous choreography of 
creation will be successful 

There you are!
Slowly, dance back and forth, listening to 
this wondrous symphony of life." 

Thus spoke Zeus and managed to unite the opposites
which resulted in the world we live in!





© Demetrios  Trifiatis 
       23 May 2018
   

* Greek Mythology tells us that when Zeus decided to create the world
turned himself to Eros ( God of love) to be able to unite the 
opposite forces that existed within the Chaos to give birth to a harmonious Cosmos!
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Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:23 PM
love the harmony within your lines, demetrios... free verse becomes you!..huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:22 PM
You so gracious my friend, nette for your delightful visit and comment! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:45 PM
- So wonderfully beautiful ... a perfect picture of a world in peace and harmony, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:21 PM
My dearest friend, Anne-Lise thank you for your precious and well expressed comments! Hugs xxx
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 11:28 AM
"Ensuring order into anarchy", spreading peace into a chaotic world.. A gracious and artful plea for love, tolerance, benevolence.. A profound imagination with expressive and impressive imagery! A great joy to read and a fount to inhale enlightenment from.. Shine and stay blessed dear Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Your comments always add to my poems my friend, Besma! They are profound and meaningful . Thank you so very much! God bless you!
Williams Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Always in synchronous harmony in a dance, the woman moves back and the man steps forward and vice versa keeping perfect pace. You have reflected this admirably in your Personification in opposite forces which is necessary to keep the balance of nature and Humanity by keeping in step. A wondrous write my dearest friend, if only.....Maria xxx
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:17 PM
How delightful to read your comment dearest, friend, Maria! I thank you for your precious visits! xxx
Pandit Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Your depiction of once upon a time is inspiring and harmonious..words of care and regard for humanity. Well said my friend, Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Vijay, my friend let me express my deep appreciation for your visits and comments!
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 4:05 AM
If only it could be like that today Demetrios, what a wonderful place the earth would be. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Yes, my friend, Tom, it would be so wonderful if ...Thank you so much!
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