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Once Upon a Time In the Bath

Once Upon A Time In The Bath Archimedes scrubs and rubs in his bathtub but the cake of soap slips from his hand again and once more and drowns ~ Next to the plug hole minding the swirl of all plight ~ He does not give up easily he is a logical legend after all and before insight washes over him like a cloth of veiled beauty ~ The lather slides down on pearls of slithering foam ~ He parts the water and reaches down between his feet which are clean by now ‘cause being a mathematician he starts at the base ~ From valid footing of premises to conclusion ~ This strikes me as de ja vu was there not this man at the slope and if I remember he always fell down while the rock stayed on top ~ As he became one with the fragments of Self ~ If I could defy gravity and tame that flipping toppling soap I’d be able to wash the crown on my head and the roots for salvation ~ Cracking all that bothers my fellow humans ~ Instead the tub burst into two halves of Yin and Yang with one almighty bang metaphorically dividing fateful error from truth ~ Trial and terror murky head but always a choice ~ Archimedes might order a new tub or jump into a natural river resign to not washing his head and stick to his feet or bow his ~ Genius down to the soap with tears in his eyes ~ 06th May 2018

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Date: 5/7/2018 9:55:00 AM
Ahh a really interesting poem to read, I really enjoyed reading it, good luck
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:36:00 AM
A fun poem, Kai. Well done.
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Date: 5/6/2018 4:02:00 AM
What an amusing write! Eureka....he got it in the end, but I thought a crown was involved. ;) I enjoyed this delve into this story from a new perspective. Thanks for your visit to my poem, also. :)
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