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Once Upon A Time

The depth of our love is immeasurable
when hearts are bequeathed passion divine
and luminous lucid unforgettable dreamscapes
are entwined from heartbeat to heartbeat
symbolizing a glorious connection of love
completely luxurious and refined
so lustrous with an ardor of seductive majesty
that pulsates from tender tendrils of our soul
    How did this world, this love, fade away?
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Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Sweet and romantic Frederic. Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:15 PM
- Beautiful and very sensitive poem, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Congrats! … so lustrous with an ardor of seductive majesty that pulsates from tender tendrils of our soul
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:42 PM
i love gato barbieri rsp his theme tume in last tango in paris... was just looking for an older guy like coltraine...thanks dear driend gor passing by!
Empress Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:28 AM
The ending is truly soul stirring dear frederick, so touching and so well written poem this is, i love so many lines in this, and also the cadence and the emotional touch of your word weaving! Truly impressive! I especially love "when hearts are bequeathed passion divine and luminous lucid unforgettable dreamscapes" beautiful words, soulful and evocative! A poem worthy of all the accolades! Pleasure reading your poem! Sending you light always
Onclaud Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:39 PM
frederick, your verses are always filled with sweet musings remarkably penned...beautiful!
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