Once Upon a Time

How could I write about a time 
when I saw the wind 
and knew that your hair was so short,
when I saw the dry sunshine 
and knew that your cheek color was so pale,
and when I invited you to a festival 
and knew that you learned nothing about make-up.

How could I write about a time
when you brought waves of laughters into my life 
and let them echo deeply in my memory,
when you walked on wooden clogs in our naive 
years and sounded the music in my sleep,
and when we first time looked at each 
other and knew the time has stopped.

Once upon a time. There was a time. A time that has 
made me shake while recalling the color of your kissing lips.

By Phan Tan Hai
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Nicholsen Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 6:33 AM
very nice poem enjoyed reading this
Nair Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Simply beautiful this 'once upon a time' love song!
Inman Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 2:44 PM
A beautifully emotional write.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2022 at 4:25 PM
I have enjoyed this sultry piece.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Hello Hai Phan, Welcome to poetry soup. You have memories here in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Hello Hai Phan, yoou are welcome. good to hear that you are happy to be here. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Phan Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Thank you very much. Very happy to be here.
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