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Once upon a time

How could I write about a time when I saw the wind and knew that your hair was so short, when I saw the dry sunshine and knew that your cheek color was so pale, and when I invited you to a festival and knew that you learned nothing about make-up. How could I write about a time when you brought waves of laughters into my life and let them echo deeply in my memory, when you walked on wooden clogs in our naive years and sounded the music in my sleep, and when we first time looked at each other and knew the time has stopped. Once upon a time. There was a time. A time that has made me shake while recalling the color of your kissing lips. By Phan Tan Hai

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Date: 6/29/2022 4:25:00 PM
I have enjoyed this sultry piece.
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Date: 6/20/2022 11:56:00 AM
Hello Hai Phan, Welcome to poetry soup. You have memories here in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2022 2:28:00 PM
Hello Hai Phan, yoou are welcome. good to hear that you are happy to be here. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Hai Phan
Date: 6/20/2022 12:18:00 PM
Thank you very much. Very happy to be here.