Once Upon a Summer Day

Once upon a summer day
in a land
far far away
in meadow fields
where faries play
a girl child
not one of the fey
somehow
did find her way
to where the 
shining unicorns lay,
and in that magical place
she did stay
for a golden
summer day.

6/17/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roper Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Great verse and imagery, Heather, I could have heard more. Hugs Eve
Idudje Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Pls madam continue... Cooking this delicacy
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:16 PM
WOW! this is beautiful. Sometimes we all want to escape to that fairy land place where all things are possible. Your simmer day is described as such and I think that is awesome.
A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:58 PM
HEATHER, you wrote a lovely summer day's poem.... congrats... SKAT
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Heather such a simple poem that makes you fell like a child again. Pure and delightfully done. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 6:01 PM
a nice summer day write... congrats... :-)... always & forever.... PD ...
Gorelick Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Nicely done..I cant resist any poem about unicorns. Congrats. BG
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:26 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
Roberts Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 11:40 PM
congrats on your 3rd place win Heather... enchanting
A   Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Heather, very pretty, you painted a nice summer day..... Linda
Roberts Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:01 AM
I see you are new to the Soup so welcome and thank you for entering my contest.
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