Once Upon a Purple Sunrise

Once Upon a Purple Sunrise

Pretty as a Periwinkle,
in your frilly summer frock,
the one with purple polka dots
that matched the cool of early dawn.

Haloed in hazy lavender hue,
I'll always remember you;
running barefoot through
the cornfields still wet
with translucent drops
of fragrant morning dew.

The scent of damp, fresh grass
lingering on your waist-length, 
ebony braids, that wrestled free
of their crimson satin ribbons,
floating away in the pale blaze 
of a new day, riding on a gentle breeze.

Your childish giggles drifted
through rows of raspberries bushes,
a look of total wonder reflected
in your bright smiling hazel eyes,
innocent as the wispy grey clouds,
that awake with the surprise
of a transient glowing sunrise.

Where did you come from, 
Little Sprite, with your 
mischievous deep dimples,
cherry-stained cheeks and lips?
Even gazelles would be jealous
of your long, lithe brown legs, 
graceful as a swan's,
gliding in casual slow motion.

Carefree as a hummingbird, 
hovering in suspended animation,
you were lost in the beauty
of your own song. 
Did you forget me,
waiting for you with 
finger sandwiches and sweet tea?

But that was okay –
it was your time to wander
in an ocean of wild yellow daisies
that needed to sprout
in your youthful heart…
take root and grow
in your memory forever.


02-17-2018

Best New Poem - 2/20/18
Poem of the Week 2/25/18 

Sponsor:     Silent One
Contest:      Sunrise and Sunset
Placement:  1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Delaney Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Such a sweet poem. Lovely imagery, SuZ
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April 29, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Thanks so much, SuZ for your sweet compliments!
Ray Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 9:36 PM
gawd i love the imagery, what a walk this one is....congratulations, absolutely fascinating
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April 14, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Many thanks, Timothy for your wonderful words! Pandita
Doll Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Pandita, so beautiful and well written, A fav for me. ~ Warren
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April 14, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Thanks so much Warren for your lovely compliments! Pandita
Hoffman Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Beautifully written, Pandita! A cheerful and uplifting piece.
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January 17, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Hi Franci, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece - it means a lot to me! Thank you my friend! Hugs. Pandita
B. Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:46 AM
"Your free verse is absolutely wonderful, Pandita.. So uplifting!! Literally uplifts me.. A stellar writing!! A Belated congratulations on your win.. Blessings to you! "
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June 25, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Hi Robertina, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Back with most deserving congrats, Pandita. Lovely. Still a FAVE.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Hi Line, thank you so much for returning with your kind congratulatory words and compliments which I so appreciate! Hope your day is full of beauty!
Lindley Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Truly, bright, uplifting and inspired poetry my friend! A great pleasure to read this fine morn. A fav..
Sietesantos Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Dear Friend, it is such a pleasure to receive your kind praises! Thank you so much! Pandita
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March 22, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Beautiful as springtime, will visit your other poems bbn
Sietesantos Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Dear Barbara, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and have an enjoyable weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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March 14, 2018 at 11:40 AM
This makes me smile.
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March 14, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Awwww! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece, dear Olive! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 4:29 PM
This is full of enchantment Pandita..Beautifully written....
Sietesantos Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Thank you - thank you, my friend Joseph! Wishing you a wonderful day! Hugs. Pandita
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March 7, 2018 at 2:24 PM
- A pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Pandita - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 7, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Hello Sunshine, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Your poem is very lovely Pandita! Congratulations on having it honored for POTW! I had to hunt to find it. I wish they would put the names on the POTW as they do not have past POTW listed. I am happy I didn't miss reading this beauty!
Sietesantos Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Hi Connie, it is so good to hear from you as always! Thank you for your lovely compliments and continued support! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
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March 2, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Hi Pandita, it is wonderful to see your excellent poetry as Poem Of The Week. Such a lovely poem that sings so gently as one does peruse the work. Your images are so crystal clear. This one has to go into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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March 3, 2018 at 11:51 PM
My dear Mike, it is such a pleasure to hear from you! My friend, I always appreciate your lovely supportive compliments and encouragement! Hope you are doing well and enjoying the weekend! Best regards and hugs! Pandita
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March 2, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Hi Pandita! Enjoyed your lovely poem. Congratulations for POTW!
Sietesantos Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Dear Shefali, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and have an enjoyable weekend, my friend! Pandita
Ashley Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Lately, I've had lots of lovely visits with you, dear friend, and I have the pleasure of a revisit once more, dear Pandita.. Returning with congratulations for your well deserved POTW honors with you silky smooth and endearing poem. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
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March 2, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Susan, you are just a wonderful person and poet! I treasure our reciprocity! Wishing you a beautiful weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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February 28, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Hello Pandita, this is a beautifully written poem. I can see everything happening in your poetry. Congratulationsn on POTw. Have a nice evening my friend.
Sietesantos Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments which I so appreciate! Hope your day is full of love and sunshine! Pandita
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February 27, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Colorful words that paint a little girl whom I can see, and with whom I relate. Well-done. Wonderful imagery.
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February 27, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Hi Caren, it is such a pleasure to receive your wonderful compliments! Thank you for your kind words! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Best regards. Pandita
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February 26, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Spectacular piece Pandita! Good to see it being honoured so. Congratulations :) xomo!
Sietesantos Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Hi Maureen, it is so good to hear from you as always! Thank you for your kind compliments and continued support! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
One Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Congrats on potw...
Sietesantos Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Awwww! My friend, your contest really inspired me to write this piece - thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to put thoughts into words. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:40 AM
What a beauty Pandita so many wo derful lines, congratulations on your POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 25, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Dear Jan, your complimentary words mean so much to me. Many thanks, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Wanter Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:08 AM
"In an ocean of wild yellow daisies that needed to sprout," and many other beautiful lines. Congratulations!
Sietesantos Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, thank you, Sunlite! I truly appreciate your thoughtful congratulations and compliments! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Williams Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTW Pandita, on this descriptive and creative poem. Absolutely stunning the imagery. A further congratulations on being top of the list of best poems....Maria
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February 25, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Hi Maria, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments which I appreciate! Have a wonderful week ahead! Hugs. Pandita
Wash Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Pandita, I could visualize the child with her cherry stained cheeks and her long, lithe brown legs. Once again, I'm impressed.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Dear Lara, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and have an enjoyable weekend, my friend! Pandita
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:30 PM
I enjoyed the effortless feel you created with this splendid piece.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Hi Richard, hope you're doing well. I am so happy to hear from you! Thank you, my friend for your sweet compliments! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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February 23, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Poignant and heart-warming, Pandita...it really is all rather lovely. My warmest regards as always! :) john
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February 23, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Dear John, it is such a pleasure to receive your lovely complimentary words. Thank you my dear! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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