Once Unnoticed Pieces

Fractures of time…
Brandied words spoken…
Sweet ardor…
Flowing from her fingers

A master creating…
Elucidations…
That fiery love…
That still echoes within

Finitely endless moment…
Her enrapturing look…
Passions first touch…
The spark that was overlooked

Shards of past days…
Etched scars upon me…
Leaving your image eternal…
In the safety of my precious yesterdays
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Cauthon Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 11:53 PM
A way with words seem like your forte. I read a few and they are all very good. plaese write more
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 25, 2008 at 5:11 PM
Done with an eloquence only you can do. Vince
Crabtree Avatar
July 12, 2008 at 1:01 PM
An equisite write, indeed. It was full of passion and love. The two attributes I hold dear next to honesty and faith. She must have been wonderful. Thanks for sharing. Love, Ivy
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2008 at 6:31 AM
Oh but I don't believe they were actually unnoticed as you do have the memory.Just not acted upon at the time maybe? Or maybe I am just dingy today. Excellent writing my friend. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 8:51 PM
Hi Charles - as always loved your work - yesterdays memories can sometimes be joyful and others very painful - if we use them wisely both can be used for gain- blessings to you and your family
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