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Once There Was

I carry a spring deep within my pocket once a child's toy I hold it close and reminisce on his warmth a warmth now long gone A smile appears as I hear the laughter permeate my mind and remember the electric train tooting and crashing down the line For a junkyard there had to be, a pile, wreckage, beside the line he is gone now - away a memory today and I carry his spring in my pocket and smile

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Date: 11/2/2018 3:26:00 PM
The beginnings of a hoarder? Perhaps he'll create his own junkyard one day, all from memories. I like this one
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Date: 11/2/2018 7:19:00 PM
Hates poetry with a passion, however, 'the idiot who left the fire', had him in stitches. So who knows. :)
Date: 11/2/2018 10:46:00 AM
I enjoyed this interesting poem :) Well done!
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:47:00 AM
Wow, that was so cool. The images this created in my mind were many. That's what I like about your poetry, there is always a story for the reader to find and interpret how they choose. Like that spring in your pocket, this one brings back memories to me.
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Date: 11/2/2018 10:12:00 AM
I did play around with that eleven and a half - but I preferred it not to rhyme. I do love stories though - perhaps I am the storytelling dancer - a jester in the kings court - but sleep beckons again. good night :)

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