Once There Was

I carry a spring deep within my pocket 
once a child's toy

I hold it close and reminisce on his warmth 
a warmth now long gone 

A smile appears as I hear the laughter
permeate my mind

and remember the electric train tooting
and crashing down the line

For a junkyard there had to be, a pile,
wreckage, beside the line

he is gone now - away
a memory today
and I carry his spring in my pocket and smile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 3:26 PM
The beginnings of a hoarder? Perhaps he'll create his own junkyard one day, all from memories. I like this one
Tapestry Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Hates poetry with a passion, however, 'the idiot who left the fire', had him in stitches. So who knows. :)
Sands Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 10:46 AM
I enjoyed this interesting poem :) Well done!
Green Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Wow, that was so cool. The images this created in my mind were many. That's what I like about your poetry, there is always a story for the reader to find and interpret how they choose. Like that spring in your pocket, this one brings back memories to me.
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November 2, 2018 at 10:12 AM
I did play around with that eleven and a half - but I preferred it not to rhyme. I do love stories though - perhaps I am the storytelling dancer - a jester in the kings court - but sleep beckons again. good night :)
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