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Light dawns outside and yet the clock delays its morning squawk. Of late, my furry mate and I would walk, but balk she does till nearly eight. It’s great that she can stay asleep; I leap from bed at hours strange. Deranged to most, I wish they’d keep on saving, stop the bleeping change. ---------- A 'Wreathed Octave', ababcdcd where lines 2-8 have an internal rhyme with the previous line's end rhyme. (e.g., clock/squawk, late/mate, etc.)

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Date: 11/6/2022 6:08:00 AM
Time change doesn’t bother me at all. I think it is fun. We spring ahead and fall back. Gives us pause.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/6/2022 6:47:00 AM
I don't mind it nearly as much as my wife does - she goes into mourning for the week approaching the loss of the hour in the spring, lol.

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