Once Our Lips Meet

~ Hand in hand we walk along this dusk bathed beach, reaching past sandcastles and starfish, narrowing beyond the furthest footprints our path has imprinted in the sand, bidding farewell to a sun now painting a twilight masterpiece on a wavering horizon, longing the cool evening’s embrace to caress us in sea breeze bliss, welcoming the tide’s white foam outlines silently approaching weathered dunes where we now pause, and as I lean in to kiss you I steal one more glimpse of nature’s panoramic beauty, for I know once our lips meet, everything else will disappear ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Wow chris this is truly stunning! I have read a couple of poems this morning that would come close but not sure if they hold a candle!;)
Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Haha! Nah mine does not compare! Have a great weekend Chris! Oh I heard from the insurance company!;)
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August 30, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Brenda so very much. What a wonderful thing to say to me. Though I read yours this morning and it shines so brightly I don't think a candle is needed. I truly do appreciate your visits.
Adams Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:59 AM
you are quite the romantic, your poems always pull the reader into the depths as they watch the magic and beauty unfold... simply gorgeous my friend! :) hugs
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August 30, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Thanks so very much Sandy. I am thrilled you found this one to your liking and I appreciate your comment because that is what I always strive to do. I always hope for the reader to get swept away by my words.
Kinch  Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:46 AM
So beautiful, I love the ending.
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August 30, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Thank you Elizabeth. I am happy you liked this one.
Salehi Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:26 AM
Nicely done, like a beautiful painting.
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August 30, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Thank you so very much for your nice comment
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 6:47 PM
ooh la la, LOvE that awesome ending!!
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August 30, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Thanks so very much Andrea. I am happy you enjoyed this romantic stroll on the beach.
There Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 5:53 PM
I don't let myself get swept up in words anymore. It has, literally, been years. It would be too much of a loss to deprive myself here. I just won't do it... Love this ~ a fave
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August 30, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Thanks so much. Your kind words have swept me up and I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Thank you again.
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