Once More

A chill in the breeze that brushes my soul
The smell of lavender as it tickles my nose

As a whisper in the trees calls out my name 
Large boulders standing freely they burden no shame

I run to this place where once we stood
I find our tree, searching over the wood

My memory guiding me, fleeing my pain
For a blemish that once was our names

All hope hangs upon the sun, it makes no sense
Watching for something, some sort of glimpse

Haunted by memories of love true and deep
Praying you’ll answer, “Was I yours to keep?”

The night sky settles in and stars are aglow
I follow the trail searching for what I don’t know

The mountain air is bitter cold and clean
You may be here though you remain unseen

Are you with me in spirit and holding my hand?
As the moon fades away I look over the land

The storm rages in and the rain starts to pour
I cry out, “Just let me hold you once more.”






To you my Cowboy for all that remains
The tears I cry tonight are merely stains
I miss you and love you as always before
I hope you are waiting for me at Heaven's door.


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beresford Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 3:37 PM
Although this is truly a wonderfull poem, it seems you write out of anguish for a lost love, I truly hope one day you find yourself and become much more than just a beautifull writer. Yuor friend Ivan.
Moreno Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 10:31 PM
Beautiful poem, nice flow and lovely dedication...Raul
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March 14, 2009 at 10:28 PM
Beautifully written and very well versed, it's not easy to write on such subjects and capture the feeling so well! As I read I felt a tear forming in the corner of my eye, for I've been in such the same spot. Thank you for your wonderful comments and even more for sharing your wonderful works. Keep writing Lolita, I love your work! -Skylar
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March 14, 2009 at 9:03 PM
I am sure he IS with you, Lolita. Your love for you "Cowboy" shines in this wonderful poem! Indeed, we will all meet one day "at Heaven's door." Very inspirational! Love, Carolyn
Bowen Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Beautifully stated...your emotional connection with poetry is astounding Lolita! I loved this sensitive and collaborative piece. You are healing a very deep wound and you are doing it with grace and dignity...and style~ God has blessed you darlin'....an he knows what he's doing! You writing heals your grief~Anyone reading it can see that~ It's beauty...giving your sweet spirit a boost of courage and solice to keep on...LIVIN..Peace in your poetry doll! Your friend at the soupie... janers
Goff Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 10:33 AM
gosh Lolita, if I let myself I could get really sad if I stay with this poem too long today, intense, heartache, emotional, wonderful, thanks! Jim
Gass Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Lolita, this is such a heartfelt dedication. The couplet is beautifully written. Excellent, emotion filled piece with great imagery! ove and hugs, Robin
Johnson Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 10:19 AM
i certainly relate to this one. I have been cheated by the loss of loved ones. We live with the hope of seeing them again. Fantastic images. Thanks for connenting on my latest. Love, Joyce
P. Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 8:07 AM
i was going to write so much 'deepened passion'... and John stole it... seriously... wonderful write filled with love and a beautiful tribute in my favourite form!! loved it... Lotita! ~ Arany
Rhinem Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 3:27 AM
Wow~So much beautiful love and deepened passion within this beautifully image filled and vivid write!!! "Hello Gifted, Precious & Priceless Lena Townsend!!!"~Here You took the reader with You, to a very sacred place within "Your Beautiful Heart!!!" ~And I could feel the sincere desire, longing and love inside of You~it was so amazing really~to be so close to "Your Beautiful Soul!!!"~"My Heart Goes To You Dear, And Your Cowboy~Love Always To You, Forever, John!!!":):)
Strand Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 1:40 AM
Lovely tribute Lolita it suits the couplet style.Rgds Brian & thank for your welcome comments
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