Once In a While

Once in a while when I was in my dreams
I think of you more than I thought
Slowly, I'm losing my sight on the reality
It's difficult to love when I'm nowhere in your journey

Your existence is like when I'm listening to jazz blues
Drowned in emotions while being enchanted
You're so beautiful
I know you're not someone I should play with
You're just too dangerous
You're like a kid
Women just love you

Secretly, I'm writing this on a piece of paper
Even though it wasn't meant for you to read it
My mum told me to marry someone who loves me
Not those who makes my heart flutter but
Your voice is like a serenade to my ears
Your style is just my type
Your smile is your charm
I feel like I could love you

Sometimes, I pretended to be fine
When you look into my eyes
I go crazy inside
That's my honest reply
I shouldn't say this, but
Your voice is like a serenade to my ears
Your style is just my type
Your smile is your charm
I feel like I could love you


24th September 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/28/2015 10:26:00 PM
Fatin, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2015 9:37:00 AM
Fatin, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:16:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Fatin!
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this piece. Congratulations on your Win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/25/2015 7:12:00 AM
I enjoyed your write, grats on a winner :)
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