Once a whale

Once a whale spent a day at the beach,
eating one too many pies of peach.
Became bloated in the sun,
to a weight over a tonne,
now has an itch she can't bend to reach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Horne Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 3:31 AM
LOL, glad to see this was a winner
Jay Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Thanks, Mr HornE
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Poor girl. ;) Congratulations Markus! :)
Jay Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Thanks, I think she's alright
Kitchin Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Markus, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.
Jay Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 4:54 AM
thanks, I enjoy writing limericks its so thanks for your contest I really enjoyed writing for it
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