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We all do it... you write a line you like... AND YOU MILK IT!..

Just messing with a notion... following months of no notions.

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Once a pong of thyme Adrift upon a gentle breeze It’s herbal scents did find me And it brought me to my knees For once a pong of thyme Inhaled by pauper or by king Has that man an allergy Then wheezing it shall bring Though once a pong of thyme Did test my hooter without ill Alas a pong of garlic Made me run for yonder hill See once a pong of thyme Gave way to scent of allium This poor old aging vampire Was in need of Valium Once a pong of thyme Was finished messing with my head An awful pungent smell came from My wife’s vegetable bed And once the pong of thyme had passed She said by way of reasoning, “I’m pepping up our liquid lunch With home grown garlic seasoning.” So once upon a time My Queen decried me when I said, “O Queen of Dark we need no pep… For we two are undead.” “Once a pong of thyme,” she said, “Has all the pagans sniffy, The garlic will deter them For our house will be too whiffy.” I told her, “Once the pong of thyme Leads yet more garlic through our door Egor will be finding us As ash piled on the floor.” So once the pong of thyme Revealed the potty plan she’d made I told my Queen, “Get Egor in… And give that man a spade!”

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Date: 7/13/2024 7:45:00 AM
Terry - if I ever have a line as brilliant as “once, a pong of thyme” I’ll be sure to forward it to you and let you play around with it, knowing you’ll come up with something hilarious! This was so much fun to read (and I’ll bet to write!).
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Date: 7/13/2024 4:47:00 PM
The moment I thought it, I knew I had to use it… The garlic was an afterthought… as was the vampire… genuinely chuffed that you enjoyed, Ilene. Promise I’ll visit your pages soon ;-)
Date: 7/12/2024 10:43:00 PM
Sounds like you'd really been through e-snuff. Pom and her balls is perhaps a solution?
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Date: 7/13/2024 4:52:00 PM
You got me there, Dilly. I kinda worked out ‘pomander balls’ and, having googled it… I think, perhaps, you’re right. The future’s orange!
Date: 7/12/2024 10:40:00 PM
Lol, on a serious note, I can't stand the stuff, must have been a vampire in my last life. Hope you're keeping well Terry. Tom
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Date: 7/13/2024 4:54:00 PM
Actually, I love garlic… never thought I would… but it adds a ‘twang’ to fried mushrooms and chicken… plus… I’ve never been attacked by a bat… surely that means something!
Date: 7/12/2024 5:10:00 PM
Brilliant Terry….just ‘so once a pong of thyme’ had me smiling every time l read it Haha! How very clever you are coming up with that!! Funnnnnny!! Debx
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Date: 7/12/2024 5:15:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. The ‘Once a pong of thyme’ line just needed playing with… I know it won’t win prizes… but it gave me a giggle. So chuffed you enjoyed. Terry

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