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Once Only once in a dream tornadoes uproot a house Spinning over black and white fields of corn Straight through the open arms of a rainbow Two companions cling way up high above the storm. Only once in a dream a yellow road Built of spiraling ochre bricks Winds away from tender magic and maleficence - Footprints of paws and prized rubied slippers. Only once in a dream flying through a rainbow Only one pilgrimage to hear a bluebird’s rhapsody Only a lullaby searching for home Only once in this multi-color reverie. Only once in a dream quest to a city – emerald green - New friends - combustible, roaring, rusting - Through purple forests dusky, enchanted orange poppies seen, Awake to cold kisses of refreshing snowflakes. Only once in a dream home holds out its hand Not held hostage in monkeyed night terrors Homecoming revealed from behind a curtain Eyes opened in real time as nightmares melt away. Only once in a dream flying through a rainbow Only one pilgrimage to hear a bluebird’s rhapsody Only a lullaby searching for home Only once in this multi-colored reverie. Coda But, It’s not about once flying through a rainbow - Journeys to wizards or a munchkin land – It’s about a cross – about a nail scarred man – Who always takes our hand on yellow roads back home. 8-30-20 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Contest: Pick a Title - Vol. 22 - Lyric 2

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Date: 9/25/2020 1:05:00 PM
- We were born with a lot of opportunities ... - A beautiful and sensitive poem, Sam - Congratulations on your great win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2020 6:58:00 AM
Hi Sam. Huge Congratulations on your Top Win! A fantastic journey to Oz, written with cool finesse. Ending caught me by surprise, I suppose Jesus possessed all traits outlined and more.
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Date: 9/24/2020 5:50:00 PM
This one got by me - stole home right under my nose! So many cool inferences to the story; I love how you describe Dorothy's friends as "combustible, roaring, rusting"! And I appreciate the ending and the homecoming we can look forward too. Congrats on your win, bound for the playoffs! Have you written music for this gem?
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Date: 9/24/2020 2:53:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem with stunning imagery, Sam:-) It makes me want to revisit 'The Wizard of Oz' movie! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 9/2/2020 4:39:00 AM
A talented write Sam and a very creative one - I love how you talk of the slippers and the yellow brick road - the Wizard of Oz, like so many nursery rhymes can be interpreted in many ways - your colors represent our journey through life - very clever. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/2/2020 4:09:00 PM
I kept thinking what would life be if we were colorblind. You are so right, the colors of Oz do represent our life journeys. The monoku inspired this lyric. Thank you Jennifer for your delightful insights and your visit. Glad we can meet this side of the rainbow! hugs and blessings coming back to you...
Date: 8/31/2020 11:36:00 PM
Sure is clever poetry, this Sam, a wonderful journey of colour.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2020 9:59:00 AM
Hi Harry! Thank you for your wonderful message! So appreciated. This story is so filled with color it reminds me of the colorful journey of life! Stay colorful my friend. All the best!
Date: 8/31/2020 4:58:00 PM
So beautiful a write, Sam. Carolyn is right on point. Get ready to shine that trophy. Pangie xx
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Date: 9/1/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend! This is very different from many of the things I write - so fun to explore the different themes. Hoping I get to use that silver polish in the cupboard! Hope your air quality is getting better. Though I am tiring of the smell of smoke, I remind myself that there are people who have lost everything. That thought brings reality "home." hugs and prayers...
Date: 8/31/2020 4:20:00 PM
Love the way you used the wizard's tale to convey the dreams that color our lives, Sam. And the "Coda" at the end is perfect! Surely a winner in the contest and a fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend! The world would be a sad place if our dreams were only in black and white! The story of Oz is so rich with many themes. Thank you for your "fav" - an honor - and for all your good wishes! hugs and prayers...

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