On Winter's Road

Hi Andrea .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

Appropriate to remember the Winter of 2013 (and others). A well-done monoku and brevity piece. Cheers on your win.

I like how you did this one, congratulations.

andrea, this is cleverly written because you've used vivid contrast, black then white, and I also like your use of alliteration - congrats on your win! :)

Congratulations on your win. This is a very vivid line. Unfortunately, I am experiencing some of this in Colorado this time of the year.

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wow~~~Way to go..Sara

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I hope that a crash was not the end results..Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

an experience or an imagery what ever may be a great poem.penned very well.Excellent.(: ) Jenish.

I couldn't stand to look either. Love, daver

love this one. A big winner here. Not sure if I got the hang of monoku from Soup's instructions on form.

Drive careful. Hope your staying warm. My visit's are sporadic now, a little off the norm. Peace. :)

Awesome as usual Andrea, just popping in quickly on your side.. Sorry for the absence.. :) Wilma

nice Monoku friend Andrea. Advance Merry Christmas to you and to your family ;)

Oh, this conjures up all kinds of images. Love it You should make this a new contest and ask for poems telling the backstory for being out on that winter's night.

Nice contrasts, Andrea.

Very nice and timely. I must be very careful this winter especially when walking.

Very nice Andrea....describes the conditions around Oklahoma very well the last few day as well...

I enjoyed your verse this evening. Light & Love

Nice line for the contest, Andrea. Good luck!

Nice one Andrea, It's that time of year....Roger

Dear Andrea - Beauty and the beast. I see a car silently hitting a tree and the snow carrying on as though nothing has happened. love, Kathy

A very beautiful monoku poem which portraits a very beautiful picture my dear friend Andrea.I love the vicarious experience you've shared through this great form of poem. Good luck in the contest. and TYSM for sharing! Have a great wkend to u & your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

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