On West Wittering Beach

Along the golden sands
Walking and talking
Holding hands
Splashing and frolicking

On West Wittering we are
Hearts thumping 
Our wants increasing
Urges pumping

A blanket we spread
On the sands of time
As we lie together
Our bodies primed

Our hands in wander
All over we roam
Our lips melted in kiss
As they find their way home

Under the clear blue sky
Our flesh is revealed
Two lovers in join
Our unity sealed

In rhythmic rhythm
On the sands we dance
The breakers applaud
To our loving romance

The wind whistles
Over our curves in delight
In a crescendo of joy
Our inner lava ignites

As we lay on the blanket
On the West Wittering sands
We were orchestral in love
With our wandering hands




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Von Graves Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Yes brings back memeories of the moon lit swamp of new jersy very romantic like vampires except not really. great write please check out my well weird misfits inspired writes please thank you
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 9:21 AM
I will echo DoOris. hot one!!
Culverhouse Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 6:58 AM
hot one
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Certainly passionate and romantic James.. could just envision the scene and the lovely romantic atmosphere... thankxxx for sharing this lovefest.... enjoyed... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 2:56 PM
You ignite the reader's "inner lava" in this passionate account of two lovers enjoying the seaside, dear Highlander. Adding the sea into the mix of poetry always seems to produce a winner for you! Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Cheeseman Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Liked this a lot James had a lovely flw to it will read more of your work much to be admired Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Very passionate write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. It would be kinda cool on the beach here today but I guess love could keep two warm. Sara
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