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On Turning Fifty

Sue screams so loudly
has she seen a little mouse –
no her first grey hair!

she’s menopausal
has hot flashes every day
saves on heating bills!

her huge birthday cake
is lit with fifty candles
fire brigade ready!

family gathers 
to celebrate her birthday
Sue’s a proud mother

her grown up children
are all happily married
grandchildren love her

Sue embraces life
her husband Jim adores her
forever in love

On Turning Fifty Contest
Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

04~18~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 4/21/2017 12:47:00 PM Very true.... Love your levity Jan! witty and contagiously funny:-) Good luck in the contest and God bless! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/21/2017 1:17:00 PM I do try and write with humour whenever i can and will be on stage again tomorrow with a bunch of like minded humourous poets for a review show:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 4/20/2017 4:38:00 PM Love your poem, Jan! Humorous, but also with a truly positive outlook! Best wishes for the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 4:43:00 PM Thanks Sandra:-) I have no idea what the sponsor is after so I took a chance with a touch of humour:-) so lovely to see you back I hope your husband continues to recover from his surgery and you are back on soup on a more regular basis:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett Date: 4/20/2017 4:14:00 PM Excellent and so funny Senryu Jan, brilliant, good luck in contest. :)) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 4:19:00 PM Thanks so much Roy hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 4/20/2017 7:52:00 AM Love the humor and the pics Jan! G/L in the contest! hugs~Che xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 4:19:00 PM Thanks Cheryl the pics sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie Date: 4/19/2017 6:44:00 PM Such a positive, happy spirit within this lady Jan:) Wonderful details. The discovery of 'grey' is most worthy of a holler! Terrific writing. lynnxxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 4:18:00 PM I'm not sure what the sponsor is after so thought I would add a little humour :-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/18/2017 8:30:00 PM Sounds like this lady has a remarkable life and a joyous one. Is that you my friend? If so....happy, happy birthday! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2017 2:16:00 AM Noooo its not about me lol and my birthday is is January and I think the last time I had a party I was 18 lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo Date: 4/18/2017 4:47:00 PM thank you for keeping alive & healthy and giving birth to many poems for 50+ years. Shalom, shalom/blessings Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 4:50:00 PM lol Anil the poem isn't about me lol:-) I've only been writing for about 3 1/2 years:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/18/2017 3:56:00 PM WELL DONE, my friend. and now HELP ME.See soupmail!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 4:40:00 PM have replied :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2017 1:46:00 PM - When your friends begin to flatter you, that you look forever young - (it's a sure sign that you are beginning to look old,unfortunately .... but do not listen to it ) - If the mirror is saying something else ... there's something wrong with the mirror - Great written, Jan :))) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 1:50:00 PM lol great advice Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Ibrahim Bashiru Date: 4/18/2017 9:33:00 AM Another lovely piece for the turning fifty contest, well-done. Really enjoyed your piece Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 11:21:00 AM Thanks Ibrahim:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta Date: 4/18/2017 9:05:00 AM Lovely is your poem ... Enjoyed ... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 11:23:00 AM thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/18/2017 8:06:00 AM To turn fifty is a blessing if you think of how many they never had that chance dear, Jan! Life is a gift of God that we have to be thankful of receiving it at any age! Delightful writing and so true! A 7! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 11:24:00 AM True Demetrios some are not so lucky in life I cherish every day after my hubbies cancer it makes you really appreciate life:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 4/18/2017 7:31:00 AM Ha, fifty is the new thirty as long as you have the right mirror and the love of family and friends to keep you young. :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 7:33:00 AM ha ha ha good one Chris:-)My mother's great great aunt lived to 111 and 121 days and was in the Guinness book of records so I hope I have a few years left! hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 4/18/2017 7:26:00 AM As long as you don't lose your ability to laugh you will be fine. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/18/2017 7:27:00 AM Oh so true Tim and I intend to try and make folks smile for as long as I can hold a pencil:-) hugs Jan xx