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On Track

The Fox turned and looked at me And skulked away sheepishly Through the woods I walked All quiet as breezes stalked Branch to branch birds play For my ears they sing the day Amidst the trees in golden bands The sun it beats, my heart it lands Butterflies, Midges, flight my eye Above the canopy bright blue sky Flowers stretch their necks for rain Evenings fall and dew will gain Quiet times these sentient hours At total peace in natures powers Of perfect pace and harmony I place my feet in empathy Wiley Fox has just come back One last glance down the track Inquisitive eye asks who are you I smile and walk, just as you do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 8:20:00 PM
God I love when I see real talent!
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Date: 2/20/2010 10:30:00 AM
nice way of arranging the poem, like the end especially
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:06:00 AM
Nature poems are so lovely to read and your write is a magnificent scene.. a beautiful refreshing walk through nature today.. thankxxx Daniel... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:06:00 AM
A delightful walk Daniel! I enjoyed it very much! Jeralynn
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Date: 2/19/2010 11:34:00 AM
Neat Rhyme that reminds me of outdoor walk on a spring or fall day. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/19/2010 1:37:00 AM
You capture the nature so well in this one Daniel.Thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/18/2010 5:00:00 PM
This fox,I wonder what He s doing there,,Intriguing Daniel..and the rest of the verses are a picture of Heaven..That Fox...:)We all meet him everynow and then.. Charma
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:46:00 AM
It's great the way you made eye contact and then both just went along your way, just as nature intended. A friend had a similar encounter with a wolf. Thanks for sharing this walk with us, Daniel! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2010 8:55:00 AM
Another excellent poem.. You are full of steam today... Good work my friend....:JP]
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