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On This Treasure Haven : Confessions of a Souper

ON THIS TREASURE HAVEN : CONFESSIONS OF A SOUPER Forever is the word I quoth here For how long I want to be here Creativity powered with watts of battery On this lovely haven of flowing poetry Oh , a flashback of this tale I would like to share ever when I held up a poem with talents spare, cold douche froze my buds of passions raw up on the mind where frustrations sat and thawed I wandered long ,before I stumbled upon here words I scribbled on almost everywhere, seasoned with emotions from mundane to rare and tossed and turned till it dulled and grayed. Some poked with a 'now what' ,and a few sighed, a few ignored , many dug with words which pacified. Just a couple or two came thumbs up pulling out the deep thorns of years ' rump. Past is past , and I don't care , now on the Soup I dwell With the soup I rise and I fall, on the Soup are my tidings as well Lost in lyrical rainbows ,dinner and shower a pineal clock reminder With amazing poet pals , treasures from distant worlds meander... Forever is the word I quoth here For how long I want to be here Creativity powered with watts of battery On this lovely haven of flowing poetry....

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Date: 7/15/2016 7:35:00 AM
Do you remember the phrase"now on the Soup I dwell" please come back and you art work with the soupers.
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:24:00 AM
Tank you for your kind words! God bless!!!
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:18:00 PM
A true treasure indeed. You have captured it well. Soup mailx2
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Date: 2/6/2013 10:21:00 AM
smashing piece Mehnaz xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 10:12:00 AM
no doubting your talent here, Mehnaz..amazing poetry..
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/6/2013 12:59:00 AM
am honored ...Harry, thank you
Date: 2/5/2013 1:57:00 AM
Wow, you sure have hit the nail on the head with this awesome write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a powerful and truthful piece you have written, Great Work!!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/6/2013 12:59:00 AM
glad that you liked it...
Date: 2/4/2013 10:58:00 PM
This is really nice. I especially like those last four couplets, which resonate with my feelings exactly!!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/6/2013 1:00:00 AM
thanks Andrea...good day to you...
Date: 2/4/2013 2:34:00 PM
Great work that speaks well of this site and the people here..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/6/2013 12:58:00 AM
thank you so much...

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