On this night

Cold winds
Void whispers
Silence in the shadows

A world relying on forgiveness
Hatred brings suffering
Separation comes without being heeded
And our paths are to be walked, alone

Cold winds
Unageing sceneries
Empty hands
Flames which burn for eternity

Moods swell
Comfort in the goddess
Temporary world
The stars hide and laugh at us

Cold winds
Cold hearts as well
Words forced back
Let's plunge in dreams
Pools of amnesia

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/12/2025 10:30:00 PM

Such a vivid, moody piece, Anoucheka. I could feel the cold winds and the quiet loneliness you painted here—beautifully haunting.

David Crandall

Date: 8/11/2025 8:23:00 PM

Sometimes, life feels that way, cold winds, silence, walking alone... here's wishing you a warm fire along your path

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/30/2025 1:56:00 PM

The winds of time tell the stories, Anoucheka. Your poetry tells of great suffering, you have a heart of gold. I too would like to stay in dreamland at times. ~Xhugs