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On This Land

Baby blue skies met me this early morning, Still hanging onto the moon brightly above Snow covered the branches of trees near and far I stood on the solid, frozen ground, in quietness, Looking at everything painted white around me The remanence of night slowly drifted out of sight The sky turned yellow, as the sun lifted its face Shining golden, glorified color, everywhere to see On this peaceful quiet land, with sparkles abound --- A new day began --- Heidi Sands 12/10/17

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Date: 12/12/2017 9:32:00 AM
To me, another beautify story of hope, a new day. I really enjoy your positivity !xxxooo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I am happy if I passed on a feeling of hope! I appreciate your support, always :)
Date: 12/11/2017 9:30:00 AM
Sounds like the beginning to a perfect day. Nice picturesque piece. // Barry
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Barry. :)
Date: 12/11/2017 12:31:00 AM
Beautiful lines and beautiful imagery Heidi, I really enjoyed this...Maria xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Maria. I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 12/10/2017 11:26:00 PM
Wow its truely beautiful. Nice work heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 5:42:00 AM
Thank you David, :)
Date: 12/10/2017 9:31:00 PM
Beautiful, Heidi,
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 12/10/2017 7:27:00 PM
Wonderful write Heidi...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 7:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph :)
Date: 12/10/2017 5:19:00 PM
Lovely imagery Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Silent One :)
Date: 12/10/2017 4:38:00 PM
And a beautiful day it is--lovely depiction of emerging scenery with the arrival of new dawn--well written, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 4:45:00 PM
Happy day to you Vijay. Thank you :)
Date: 12/10/2017 4:05:00 PM
Absolutely awesome imagery Heidi this is a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan ! :)

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