On This Grayish, Black and White Day

She runs 
to top the hill 
and listen for songbirds.  
On this grayish, black and white scene, 
there are only crows in the sky, screeching 
like a hawk who has eyed a snake. 
What is that rustling sound? 
Is there a snake? 
She runs. 

The leaves 
atop the trees 
rustle now and snicker
when she trips over fallen limbs. 
The darksome clouds release their hold of rain 
on this grayish, black and white scene. 
Despising the day, she 
crawls home, cursing 
the leaves. 

April 28, 2023

Sponsor	Sotto Poet
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day..................
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May 4, 2023 at 12:55 PM
I thank you, Paula. It's always nice to have a positive reply. Enjoy your day and evening.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:49 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, R.A.P. :)
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May 4, 2023 at 12:56 PM
I welcome your commendation, Anne-Lise. May your day be filled with poetry, both yours and ours.
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May 2, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on writing such a great poem with poetry's elegance in my contest.
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May 4, 2023 at 12:57 PM
My sincere appreciation, Sotto, for the placement in your contest and for a positive supportive comment. May your next write be the best yet.
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