On These Plains I Lay

On These Plains I Lay

White fire and heat, blinding light, blinding bright.
Shot down on these plains,
My soldiers, My warriors,
Fading from my sight.

Battle lost?  Battle won?
Battered men, moaning in the morning sun.
I believe I am dying,
Not too old, definitely too young.

Fading.  Now floating. 
Moving forward to the light.
A pull on my cloak.
My eyes closed, but open to this sight,

of a man in kilt,
Arm outstretched to mine.
I reach for his hand, battle scarred
for all time.

My eyes closed and still,
but I see his face clear.
I know this man.  I fought this man.
Still he calls me near.

"James" he beckons.
"Its Charles of Culloden, the man you spared."
"In the moor, 
on the field in Scotland". 

Indeed I did, 
this Jacobite I spared,
This wounded Fraser,
laid down in despair.

Cumberland's' order gave no dignity,
Gave no honour,
to this brave Scot.
He was not my fodder.

Why are you here, 
my mind speaks in silence.
This "Fraser" replies,
Men of honour have earned this quietness.

Walk with me, to our God, to our Saviour.
Pay no heed to this battle.
You have fought.  You have died,
with honour and with favour.

Come to heaven and stand with pride.
Your life distinguished, and now time to rest,
beside our saviour.
By His side.

I reach out to grasp,
this Jacobite Fraser.
He holds me, and comforts me,
on our way to heaven,
on our way to our Saviour.

And now I rest.

Graham Alexander Devenish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 11:29 AM
A wonderfully written poetic story from beginning to end.
Devenish Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Franci, I am sorry for sending this so late. Thank you for your encouraging comments. Graham
Chamberlain Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Thank you for sharing. Great imagery. "Battered men, moaning in the morning sun". War is cruel and brutal.
Devenish Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Joanna, I am sorry to reply so late. I am not very good with figuring out this website. Thank you very much for your comments Graham
Goff Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Fabulous, Graham! Have been reading about the Battle of Culloden for an hour since reading your poem...the origins of Canada & current UK rule becomes quite clear, as all of it originates from your poem...
Devenish Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 3:46 PM
James, I am not very good with the whole computer thing or I would have replied a long time ago. Thank you very much for your wonderful comments. Graham
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