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On the Spot

Night is cold Heart is warm enough To show the world That I am tough. I close my eyes Put a smile on my face And take myself To a happy place. I open my eyes Proceed with my night Knowing my happy place Will always be bright. Hayley webb-myers 29/07/2016

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/24/2016 8:34:00 AM

My pleasure, being with people I care about is my happy place. If they are happy, all the better.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/23/2016 7:42:00 PM

What is your happy place? You have captured the emotion, however I am wanting you to develop the photograph. This feels like the beginnings of something special.

Hayley Webb-Myers
Date: 8/23/2016 7:59:00 PM

Hey thanks for reading, um well my happy place you know have got me thinking about. talk about on the spot... Ha Ha I like being around happy people if everyone around me is happy I'm happy. i know thats not what you call a happy place but that's all i got at the minute. but thank you for giving me something to think about something to now find out about myself, no-ones really asked me anything about what i like feel whatever, so thank -you. I gotta go attendend to my kids right now but when i get a chance to get back on here i'll read some of your poems. thanks again.